Thursday, September 18, 2014
Mystery
As Amy was walking in the forest with her brother Paul they heard a loud boom. Then amy turned around and Paul was gone. When amy noticed paul was gone she ran as fast as she could out of the forest. When Amy reached the end of the forest she realized that she had to go back into the forest to find her brother. Amy then retraiced her steps to where she had left her brother. When she finally got to where her brother had disappeared she saw that there was a hole in the ground. Amy was very reluctant to look into the hole but she knew she had to find her brother. Finally she decided to look in the hole. When she looks in the hole she saw a face that was not her brothers. Amy and Paul were never seen again.
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I really like the concept of your story.
ReplyDeleteAlso, there are a few words or letters missing in some places so make sure to edit that.
DeleteI like your story it's mysterious and amazing
ReplyDeleteThe ending is definitely mysterious. I love it.
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